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Post by Thy Dungyeon Maestyr on Nov 24, 2013 0:15:01 GMT -8
Kelly did just win nanowrimo, but it's gonna feel crappy if the story isn't both finished and satisfyin' for him at the end of the month. Hey, look at you guys! That Brangeliner business was hecka funny. Conversely, the possessing spirit has a pretty lousy sense of humor to be pulling that old trick. and DeeK's story went SUDDENLY VIOLENT!!!! WHat now? Also more mention of the bad science, haha. Those kooky kids.
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Post by ∆§Indea§∆ on Nov 24, 2013 2:23:32 GMT -8
Congrats Kelly. ;D @chris- Thanks. He is from the 1960's, so it's totally fresh, totally. It's a classic. @deek- I can't wait to read the update, as soon as I've caught up.
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Post by ◊◊BLOODBEASTER◊◊ on Nov 24, 2013 4:11:58 GMT -8
Thanks Indea! I kept resubmitting my score to see if I'd gotten there, and I'd only written 100 words. But yeah, my goal is 65k or bust! I think I may be finally working my way to an ending. Your story is mad funny, I like how all the adults are total jerks, but Adrian sounds like a funny little brat too, haha. I love imagining his sparkling eyes thinking about ice cream yet to come. @ DK- omg suddenly violent indeed! That stand off at the dental office was nutz, is was like this scene But no one said 'I beseech you' and I thank you for that. I'm totally on the edge of my seat waiting to see what the heck's up with that mutilated human corspe!
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Post by ∆§Indea§∆ on Nov 24, 2013 13:03:39 GMT -8
@kelly- Thanks ;D. I think when you're a teenager all adults seem like jerks, that's kinda what I'm aiming for .
@deek- I'm joining Kelly on the edge of my seat, holy crap Fabi, what did she do? I'm really curious about the St. Rose terror. So much good gritty stuff going on, it's hard to pick one. I love that you've caused me to reassess the scientists, I thought Fabi was just an innocent bystander with naught to be shot at.
@chris- Speaking of plague, all kinds of shit going down there. What did Ernest do to enrage such a beast, so many questions!! It's fantastic stuff, it's really taking off. I can't wait for more!
All the stories you peeps are writing are so good, this was a great idea Chris.
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Post by Thy Dungyeon Maestyr on Nov 24, 2013 20:39:02 GMT -8
now it's eatin cops too! sunuvabitchin wendzibo! where will it all? eating other forms of architecture? misplaced cetaceans? the president?!
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Post by ∆§Indea§∆ on Nov 24, 2013 20:46:01 GMT -8
It will start consuming misplaced socks. Also, we don't have no president, so nernies.
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DKender
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Post by DKender on Nov 24, 2013 20:46:13 GMT -8
@ Indea/Kelly/and Christopher - Thank you! Your comments totally give me the motivation to keep going. I'll win this thing yet! @ Kelly - Well, now somebody has to say 'I beseech you' at least once. I’m up through Ch. 17 of Root Rot, and when this happened: My face was like D8 I love the dynamic between Bernard and our heroic gardening protagonist! Dynamic duos should be on my magna carta list, especially when the chemistry is good like between them two. And with your atmospheric descriptions, it’s so easy to picture everything in my mind's eye, like a fantastic olde ghost story. What will happen next?! I gotta be careful not to accidentally read spoilers in this part of the board @ Chris - When I first saw Kubrick's The Shining as a kid, during the "Redrum" mirror reveal, I felt a dread-heavy sense of “Oooooooh, that makes sense. Creepy.” Well, I got that feeling when the pig head revealed the punchline of his joke. And it’s much more clever than “Redrum,” to boot. I really love the dark turn everything is taking. Gotta read faster. Know more what happens things.
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Post by ∆§Indea§∆ on Nov 25, 2013 0:46:15 GMT -8
You'll kick it in Deek!! You better watch your back though, I'm at 76%! ;D I'm totally tortoise-ing this shiz up!!
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Post by Thy Dungyeon Maestyr on Nov 25, 2013 2:19:48 GMT -8
Thx a lot, peeples! I'm into it, oh yes.
Tho thru no fault of your own, I kept falling asleep earlier trying to read Adrian's interrogation. I didn't get enough sleep two days running and was having visions of moldy cheese bread while the song "Goin' to a Go-Go" played on infinite loop. That was weird.
But now I am more awake and finished it! OH SNAP! Who you gonna call, Adrian?
also, feel like I've been in that room before.
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Post by ∆§Indea§∆ on Nov 25, 2013 13:49:50 GMT -8
Thanks so much for reading it Chris. ;D Yeah, but every messy room is a unique ecosystem.
Sounds like a funky dream on all accounts.
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Post by Thy Dungyeon Maestyr on Nov 25, 2013 22:41:15 GMT -8
Wasn't exactly a dream... I was still sorta awake. I do not like those kinds of funk. Maybe if it was some good non-moldy cheese and "Fantastic Voyage" by Lakeside I'd be more into it...
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Post by ∆§Indea§∆ on Nov 25, 2013 23:19:54 GMT -8
Fair enough. ;D BTW: I've totally just caught up to you fools!! 80%, hell yeah!
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DKender
Only One Skeleton has the Power to Control both Life and Death, Light and Dark, Words and Blank Space, Our Humble Lives Continue Only by the Grace and Magnanimity of This Skeleton
Nay, let us walk from fire unto firey skeleton ...
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Post by DKender on Nov 25, 2013 23:58:35 GMT -8
@ Indea - I looked all over for a gif from the "Easy Way Out" music vidya, where Gotye man is slamming his head against the typewriter with DEFEAT. But apparently one does not exist yet. I guess this link wwill have to do. vimeo.com/37356685(edited link for vimeo, which is apparently official or sumthin) Edit: Not as cool as the dancing pirates above and yonder, though.
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Post by ∆§Indea§∆ on Nov 26, 2013 0:16:06 GMT -8
True, true those pirate costumes are boss. You can do it Deek!! Technically you're 17000 words ahead of me remember and your story is the bomb dot com!! ;D
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DKender
Only One Skeleton has the Power to Control both Life and Death, Light and Dark, Words and Blank Space, Our Humble Lives Continue Only by the Grace and Magnanimity of This Skeleton
Nay, let us walk from fire unto firey skeleton ...
Posts: 9,204
Gender: Unknown Skeleton
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Post by DKender on Nov 26, 2013 20:10:01 GMT -8
I think I can I think I can I think I can choo choo.
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